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People do not disappear.
I don't think, at least
I don't need to try
This is the way things are.
I cannot get to sleep.
They're not working, the factories
make my decisions for me
This is the way things are.
The party is not faulted.
I can't see, the people
dance to the atrophy
This is the way things are.
They stuck it in my arm.
I can feel, the drugs
make me happy for now?
This is the way things are.
Thank God for-
This is...the...the way things are...
thud
©2007-2009 ~Esseco
:iconesseco:

Author's Comments

This was given to me by a friend, though I've no clue how he was able to get it while it was under lock-down. It was written by A. Tkac, who was arrested earlier this week by the IOF [link]

I don't know what to make of it. The lines can all mean upwards of four things depending on how they are read. If you read it straight, it's the rantings of a converted submissive. However, if you disregard punctuation, the lines mean entirely different things. It becomes a message of resistance. Then, if you combine lines together to form an even longer sentence, it seems to fight even harder. Still, even with these messages, there's no reason this should go unheard.

-Think harder.

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:iconrayelian:
it seems shorter than the first version i saw. i like it though

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"Romance is dead- it was acquired in a hostile takeover by Hallmark and Disney, homogenized, and sold off piece by piece." - Lisa Simpson
:icontipon-mytongue:
"I don't think, at least
I don't need to try
This is the way things are."

Theres so much between those lines, your friend is quite the writer
:iconesseco:
If you knew, please don't be offended by my assuming you didn't, but this is actually satire. The artist's comments are as much a creative piece as the poem itself, and the article I linked.

I wrote them both. I have a huge interest in the idea of distopian governments (a la 1984) and am writing a short story set in the world that this takes place. This was basically creating backstory.

In any event, this is one of the best compliments I've received. Thank you, it's stuff like this that gets me to keep writing, as I am an immortality whore.

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I don't get it.
:iconpuremind:
Reminds me a lot of the dystopian books i've read: Anthem, We, 1984, Animal Farm, The Sprawl trilogy etc...Your piece was very interesting in the backdrop of this reading.

But i tend to be disappointed by most modern dystopic literature which seems to be an endless repetition of recycled ideas...we dont seem to be willing or able to push our imagines to encompass systems that are yet to be or that our in our face right now...the only dystopia that still works is the christian specific dystopia and the occasional surprise like Fight Club...even the nature or environmentalist dystopics have run out of juice...

I don't know, maybe i haven't been reading enough of the genre lately. I guess what im saying is try experimenting...this genre is too good to go down in dust because of lack of creativity.

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Wash away our sins

*VampireWriters *PlagueConcilium
:iconesseco:
I think we're at the point where different mediums are starting to take the limelight away from books in this field. The 1984 movie was nothing special, but Fight Club was just as good of a movie, if not better, than the book. Children of Men WAS a better movie than book. Fallout 3 and Metal Gear Solid 4 are awesome games that explore entire dystopian worlds in ways books and movies can't.

It's getting hard to keep up, but I'd say the industry is evolving fast enough to stay fresh.

Thanks for the comments on my work, too.

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I don't get it.

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